is my poem ok?

Question: im 13 and i wrote a poem.....is it good? A young girl could smell the pregnance of roses. A young girl could feel the happiness brought by the roses. A young girl could touch the soul of the petals from the roses. A young girl could easily pick the beautiful silent roses. But she could never avoid touching the torns of the roses that would turn her into a lady. its just mean that a young girl can be found by love...and once it hurts...shell be more stronger.....is it good?

Answer: ummm. it's okay. interesting meaning. even for a poem, it is still to repetative. but that's just my opinion.

Related Questions

Related Items